After I posted yesterday, I realized that there actually were a few edits I had wanted to make. And big ones at that.
First of all, the fainting scene seemed a bit out of character for Lily. So, I replaced it with another showcase of her temper.
Secondly, the name "Lightning" was seeming a bit cheesy to me, so I changed it to "Flash", an equally suitable name.
And lastly, to make "The Collision" sound more, well, established, I decided to translate the name into Latin. So it is now referred to as "Offensus".
That's all. For now :)
-Annabelle
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